Quiet Posted February 15, 2019 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2019 RESERVED- Last biography with some pictures Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoza Posted February 21, 2019 Report Share Posted February 21, 2019 Jeeeez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KeistuoliZ Posted March 1, 2019 Report Share Posted March 1, 2019 (edited) Very nice tinder profile, are you free tonight? (JK) Very nice story. Edited March 1, 2019 by KeistuoliZ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted March 2, 2019 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2019 13 hours ago, KeistuoliZ said: Very nice tinder profile, are you free tonight? (JK) Very nice story. Thanks and No I'm Not :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyElvis Posted March 9, 2019 Report Share Posted March 9, 2019 That is very creative story you have written! Not regretting a second I spent reading this, got me thinking about how others are struggling in life and gave me a little hope to keep going and not stopping. Hope you reach your goals! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted March 11, 2019 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2019 Thanks FlyElvis 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lookas Posted March 25, 2019 Report Share Posted March 25, 2019 Great Story! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted March 26, 2019 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2019 20 hours ago, Lookas said: Great Story! Thanks, I glad you like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoldenEye Posted April 8, 2019 Report Share Posted April 8, 2019 That was innovative! Are you sure that you are not an author of story books? Creating that condition to take those pictures is absolutely difficult! Good job! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted April 9, 2019 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2019 22 hours ago, GoldenEye said: That was innovative! Are you sure that you are not an author of story books? Creating that condition to take those pictures is absolutely difficult! Good job! Thanks, and I wrote everything happened in game. Maybe later I will continue this story or maybe not! depends what I would do later, and Glad you like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xekn Posted April 9, 2019 Report Share Posted April 9, 2019 Amazing! Take it far. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yputi Posted April 18, 2019 Report Share Posted April 18, 2019 omg... I love it. Honestly, I saw this post earlier, but now I decided to check it out again. The first thing I directly noticed was the song you added in the beginning. One More Light is one of the songs I like so much, big fan of LP. Now I am considering making a post about my main character aswell Its good to have an amazing backstory of your character and you are a great example! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxxJustTimmy Posted April 19, 2019 Report Share Posted April 19, 2019 This was actually an amazing story to read! hope you continue it at some point. Or possibly start a character story with Alison Quinn. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted April 19, 2019 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2019 23 hours ago, Yputi said: omg... I love it. Honestly, I saw this post earlier, but now I decided to check it out again. The first thing I directly noticed was the song you added in the beginning. One More Light is one of the songs I like so much, big fan of LP. Now I am considering making a post about my main character aswell Its good to have an amazing backstory of your character and you are a great example! thanks to you for saying this stuff, I'm greatful and yeah meaning full song and good to hear. and I like to see your background story of your character. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted April 19, 2019 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2019 19 hours ago, xxxJustTimmy said: This was actually an amazing story to read! hope you continue it at some point. Or possibly start a character story with Alison Quinn. thanks probbaly i will continue with this character since i have second thought to continue with this character not Alison but thanks for telling me that <3. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted June 19, 2019 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2019 (edited) ((2019 19 June)) ((This is first video I made, sorry if not good enough to get your attention.)) After weeks she was found by a fisherman while the person who tried to get some fishes, as he was shocked to say "What really happened?" "Who is she?" "What happened to her and why she passes out the middle of the river without any move or reaction on her" After while he called Medic since he doesn't know how to act and he never been in this situation. After a few minutes medic arrived and start to check everything on her to see how they could help her to wake up. Medic just did some treatment and he had to transfer her to hospital and he did it as soon as he could and he tried to be fast as he could be. When medic transfer Elena Pierce to hospital, staffs members of the hospital did surgery to help Elena to make her conscious and saved her as she breathing very abnormal. After while she wakes up and she felt so much pain on her chest and her hand as she jumped from the waterfall. she was totally felt dizzy and couldn't stand on her feet. The doctor told her to stayed one day inside the hospital for any incoming events. but she insists to go to her house and stayed there. She took the taxi and went to the general store and bought a new battery and turned her phone on and went to her house. When she opened the door for herself she took a deep breath and takes out her phone and starts to check messages. But she was so tired even she couldn't reply to them, she just drops the phone on her desk and she went to her bed to rest as she was tired and felt dizzy. As she was weak and couldn't do anything she stayed in her house to get herself together, she didn't leave her house for 2-3 days. Edited June 19, 2019 by Quiet 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Met_Zoli Posted June 19, 2019 Report Share Posted June 19, 2019 I hope that this is not the last part of your sweet story, Keep it up and believe me that this is one of the best Stories which people can find on the forum. Well Done. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sahand bagheri Posted August 9, 2019 Report Share Posted August 9, 2019 This is awesome 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabrina Candace Posted August 23, 2019 Report Share Posted August 23, 2019 I'm actually loving it myself keep it up Elena haha 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JacobJordan Posted August 23, 2019 Report Share Posted August 23, 2019 Cool - Keep it up 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiet Posted September 16, 2019 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2019 (edited) ((2019 17 September)) ((Ending Chapter)) After that day she left the hospital she had a call from stranger and request for meeting with her. The first place she didn't accept his request but she finally accepts his offer and they met each other at Chumash. When they reached each other they started to talk and the stranger who made the meeting with her was her brother. She didn't believe that she has a brother and she didn't know it whole time but after he explained everything for her she believes in everything and she was very happy because of it She tried to spend 2-5 days in her house to get her health back so she can move with her life. She was weaker than she thought, because of the previous event happened to her. One day, she felt cold tried to make a coffee for herself but she suddenly passed out and meanwhile she was felling on the ground, she breaks out a lot of glasses were on the table so one of her neighbors heard sound while he was in back of his house, he called 911 and requested for medic. After while medic arrived to mirror park and started to speak to the neighbor who called 911 and he said: "I heard something broke and I know she wasn't feeling good in overall I think something might happen to her". Medic decided to check inside the house, he started knocking the door for 3 minutes and he didn't get an answer from the inside house so he just entered the house without any permission. As he entered the house, he started to check around the house slowly, after 2 minutes he went towards kitchen and find her on the ground he started to run towards her as soon as he could and drop his BLS Kit and start to do his treatment. The medic(Jimmy King) who respond to 911 was a friend of Armin Pierce (Her Brother). medic puts the oxygen mask on her face and adjusts her on a stretcher to move towards the ambulance. while he tried to exit house he started to call her brother Armin Pierce. Armin Pierce responds to the medic as he called him and Armin was panic and just jumped into his vehicle and drove to the hospital. they placed Elena Pierce to the surgery room and started to doing surgery on her. Armin Pierce arrived at the hospital was worried about her sister since he found her recently. after 20 minutes doctors left the surgery room and unfortunately she didn't manage to survive from this situation. Armin was destroyed from inside and was crying, he lost his sister while he found her recently. it was heartbreaking for him. (( Thanks for all support and people who read my whole story. This is the Last post from Elena Pierce since she died. it was even hard for me to put my character into the end. )) Edited September 16, 2019 by Quiet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sabrina Candace Posted September 17, 2019 Report Share Posted September 17, 2019 Noooo Elena...... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archer4011 Posted October 22, 2019 Report Share Posted October 22, 2019 Very interesting story! Hope we see more girls like Elena rise from Iran and write such stories! 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
childofkorn Posted October 22, 2019 Report Share Posted October 22, 2019 Amazing story. Keep up the hard work and I look forward to the next part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
