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Elena Pierce

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FlyElvis Newbie

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That is very creative story you have written! Not regretting a second I spent reading this, got me thinking about how others are struggling in life and gave me a little hope to keep going and not stopping. Hope you reach your goals!

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22 hours ago, GoldenEye said:

That was innovative! Are you sure that you are not an author of story books? 😃

Creating that condition to take those pictures is absolutely difficult! Good job! 🤞🏽

Thanks, and I wrote everything happened in game. Maybe later I will continue this story or maybe not! depends what I would do later, and Glad you like it.

Yputi Experienced

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omg... I love it.
Honestly, I saw this post earlier, but now I decided to check it out again. The first thing I directly noticed was the song you added in the beginning. One More Light is one of the songs I like so much, big fan of LP.
Now I am considering making a post about my main character aswell 😄 Its good to have an amazing backstory of your character and you are a great example!

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23 hours ago, Yputi said:

omg... I love it.
Honestly, I saw this post earlier, but now I decided to check it out again. The first thing I directly noticed was the song you added in the beginning. One More Light is one of the songs I like so much, big fan of LP.
Now I am considering making a post about my main character aswell 😄 Its good to have an amazing backstory of your character and you are a great example!

thanks to you for saying this stuff, I'm greatful and yeah meaning full song and good to hear.
and I like to see your background story of your character.

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19 hours ago, xxxJustTimmy said:

This was actually an amazing story to read! hope you continue it at some point. Or possibly start a character story with Alison Quinn.

thanks probbaly i will continue with this character since i have second thought to continue with this character not Alison but thanks for telling me that <3.

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((2019 19 June))

((This is first video I made, sorry if not good enough to get your attention.))

 

After weeks she was found by a fisherman while the person who tried to get some fishes, as he was shocked to say

"What really happened?"

"Who is she?"

"What happened to her and why she passes out the middle of the river without any move or reaction on her"

 

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After while he called Medic since he doesn't know how to act and he never been in this situation.

After a few minutes medic arrived and start to check everything on her to see how they could help her to wake up.

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Medic just did some treatment and he had to transfer her to hospital and he did it as soon as he could and he tried to be fast as he could be.

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When medic transfer Elena Pierce to hospital, staffs members of the hospital did surgery to help Elena to make her conscious and saved her as she breathing very abnormal.

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After while she wakes up and she felt so much pain on her chest and her hand as she jumped from the waterfall. she was totally felt dizzy and couldn't stand on her feet.

The doctor told her to stayed one day inside the hospital for any incoming events. but she insists to go to her house and stayed there.

 

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She took the taxi and went to the general store and bought a new battery and turned her phone on and went to her house.

When she opened the door for herself she took a deep breath and takes out her phone and starts to check messages.

But she was so tired even she couldn't reply to them, she just drops the phone on her desk and she went to her bed to rest as she was tired and felt dizzy.

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As she was weak and couldn't do anything she stayed in her house to get herself together, she didn't leave her house for 2-3 days.

 

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((2019 17 September))

((Ending Chapter))

After that day she left the hospital she had a call from stranger and request for meeting with her. 

The first place she didn't accept his request but she finally accepts his offer and they met each other at Chumash.

When they reached each other they started to talk and the stranger who made the meeting with her was her brother.

She didn't believe that she has a brother and she didn't know it whole time but after he explained everything for her she believes in everything and she was very happy because of it

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She tried to spend 2-5 days in her house to get her health back so she can move with her life.

She was weaker than she thought, because of the previous event happened to her.

One day, she felt cold tried to make a coffee for herself but she suddenly passed out and meanwhile she was felling on the ground, she breaks out a lot of glasses were on the table so one of her neighbors heard sound while he was in back of his house, he called 911 and requested for medic.

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After while medic arrived to mirror park and started to speak to the neighbor who called 911 and he said: "I heard something broke and I know she wasn't feeling good in overall I think something might happen to her".

Medic decided to check inside the house, he started knocking the door for 3 minutes and he didn't get an answer from the inside house so he just entered the house without any permission.

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As he entered the house, he started to check around the house slowly, after 2 minutes he went towards kitchen and find her on the ground he started to run towards her as soon as he could and drop his BLS Kit and start to do his treatment.

The medic(Jimmy King) who respond to 911 was a friend of Armin Pierce (Her Brother). medic puts the oxygen mask on her face and adjusts her on a stretcher to move towards the ambulance. while he tried to exit house he started to call her brother Armin Pierce. 

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Armin Pierce responds to the medic as he called him and Armin was panic and just jumped into his vehicle and drove to the hospital.

they placed Elena Pierce to the surgery room and started to doing surgery on her.

Armin Pierce arrived at the hospital was worried about her sister since he found her recently.

after 20 minutes doctors left the surgery room and unfortunately she didn't manage to survive from this situation.

Armin was destroyed from inside and was crying, he lost his sister while he found her recently. it was heartbreaking for him. 

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(( Thanks for all support and people who read my whole story.

This is the Last post from Elena Pierce since she died.

 it was even hard for me to put my character into the end. 😞 ))

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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