Tommy Permuy Posted October 9, 2017 Report Posted October 9, 2017 (edited) Edited October 9, 2017 by Tommy Permuy 2
Tommy Permuy Posted October 9, 2017 Author Report Posted October 9, 2017 Hey @Andor, being that you are the leader of Weazel News, I would love some feedback on my first article! I hope you like it. Same goes for everyone else in Los Santos!
Andor Posted October 9, 2017 Report Posted October 9, 2017 ((pm me on discord and I give you feedback))
Kay133 Posted October 9, 2017 Report Posted October 9, 2017 ((The article was interesting but you switched from present to past and then back to present which was a bit weird to read.))
